Saturday, February 4, 2012

Be Mine! Pretty Peas??


The Matlock is picking Nonna's fertile brain again for the prompt this week, so I'm peapared to give it my best. 100 words...plus a pea pod pic. (The prompt, as befits the subject matter, is in green.)

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Be Mine. Pretty Peas??
©2012 Susan Noyes Anderson

You'll always be the one for me;
we're two peas in a pod.

So plump, so round...You're all I see.
My soft, green heart is awed.

You've really got me in the soup
(I hope it's not split pea.)

'Cause I could never split from you.
I'm your sweet chickpea, see?

For you, I'd leave the stalk behind.
Pick me! You peel my skin.

You photosynthesize my mind.
Lock, stalk and leaf, I'm in.

Even your chlorophyll is hot!
(No one does green like you.)

You're in my every squishy thought...
my pea-brained dream come true.


23 comments:

Ames said...

Aw such an uplifting post and perfect for Valentine's Day. You could write cards for Hallmark!~Ames

writetuit said...

This is adorable, and perfect for the prompt. Cute!!

Karen Mortensen said...

I love it. The pictures were awesome. I really liked the line that said you photosynthesize my mind. Very cleaver.

Pondside said...

But I love split pea!!

Bookie said...

Cute little ditty over peas!
True pea love!

Eva Gallant said...

That is too cute! love it!

Brian Miller said...

smiles...i like mine with a bit of salt on it...ha...i hope its not split pea...thanks for the chuckle in that...have a wonderful saturday sue

anitamombanita said...

hahaha...so cute...I like this little diversion from the you I know!

yaya said...

Only you could take a simple subject like peas and make them extra special and extra fun!

Grandma Honey said...

Now that is CUTE!

Karen S. said...

Such a darling poem....and the cutest pea heart ever!

Tima said...

I love it!!!

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Rawknrobyn.blogspot.com said...

Your wording is brilliant, Sue. (e.g., "You photosynthesize my mind.") I love every line.

xoRobyn

Gail said...

Cute!

Jo said...

Loved this little ditty!!!

Judie said...

Another "Sue" original that we would like to steal! Good one, Sue!!

maygodblessus said...

A cute valentine's day piece! I just started my first piece of Saturday Centus! Hope to get more in time to come :)

Darlene said...

This is nothing sort of terrific, Sue. I really got a big laugh(not just a chucle} out of this one. I'll never quite know just how your furtile brain works, but it was working overtime on this.

If I live to be a hundred(hopefully, hopefully) I will never understand how you managed to perfect your incredible talent.

I agree with Ames, you should be making tons of money with your ability to write these poems so prolifically.

Anna said...

Fun poem with every possible pea-expression there is! Well done!

Best wishes,
Anna

'Parent-teacher meeting' Anna's SC wk 92

JDaniel4's Mom said...

Wow! I think you aced this prompt!

Caroline said...

"You photosynthesize my mind.Lock, stalk and leaf, I'm in." --As a Horticulture grad, I must say this had me all warm and fuzzy! :)

Cute, cute CUTE!

Jenny said...

How do you do this?

Seriously, Miss Sue.

I want to be EXACTLY just like you when I grow up!

You're really a PEA lling in so many ways!

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