Jenny Matlock has bestowed upon us a near-perfect prompt today, along with 100 words of our own choosing to develop it. We even get to illustrate! Isn't that chair-itable? ;)
(the prompt, as always, is in red)
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Chair-ity
©2012 Susan Noyes Anderson
The chair dominated the small room, but it didn’t matter. She loved every rounded edge and sharp corner of it, every curve and angle shaped to hold her form, to cradle her own cradling. A rocking chair is what she’d asked for…hoped for…but as was her man’s custom, he gave more.
That chair cost dear, more dear than parts and pieces. He worked in sugar maple, like his people, and made the hot hide glue his daddy used. But it was sleepless nights that brought the value…and work-worn hands that labored until dawn.
It showed up in the nursery one bright morning. She squealed, and he came running from the yard. She told her ma his soul was in his eyes.
And in her woman’s heart, she took it in.
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31 comments:
Oh, this is lovely,Sue! Nice, nice, nice.
So beautiful, Sue--So very, very beautiful.
smiles...this is beautiful...my uncle was a wood worker...and i still keep one of his pieces by the couch to this day...just knowing his hands formed it is def special...
Outdid yourself with this one. Beautiful imagery. Who needs 300 words when 100 is perfect.
Absolutely loved this one!!
Aw, I want that relationship:@)
beautiful words
Wow! Sue I was somewhere in the Appalachian mountains seeing this story unfold. Excellent writing. Very Moving!~Ames
Love this story. I can feel that the husband truly felt every bit of work that he did on this rocking chair was an expression of his pure love.
I wish I had more of my dad's woodworking. He did make some amazing things. I hope you saw the gorgeous pull down desk that was in Nancy's home when you were there. She now has it in her new condo in Robert's room.
At least I do have my snake parts and the chains. He did make me that doll bed, but it is just made from wood scraps. Still I treasure it.
Nothing is as beautiful or wonderful than something put together with love as the first ingredient. Great story and fun prompt!
Straight from the heart, very lovely.
I love it. Very nice.
Best wishes,
Melody
MerrieMelody.blogspot.com
I'll just copy what the others said... beautiful and simply a joy to read.
Sue...quite a lovely bit of writing. Wonderful!
Oh, yeah... goosebumps!
What a wonderful story... in just 106 words! Wow!
Your words warm my heart. Very nicely done, Sue.
xoRobyn
You never fail to please, Sue. it painted a lovely picture, helped along by a few personal memories.
I have a guy like that.
I love this story.
What a love story.
That was so lovely; thanks you for your precious talent of writing. My heart was touched today.
Hugs!
Very descriptive.
Once again I am in awe of the amazing way you write. You always leave me wanting more. Well done!
What a wonderful picture of home and love you painted with this.
Nice take on the prompt!
Lovely. It made me think of the antique rocking chair my husband reupholstered for our first baby:)
loved the picture you used. Fits in perfectly with the sweet story
What a beautiful tale, full of warmth and humanity. Loved it:
That's a very pretty and sweetly written story. Love the picture too; there is something comforting about a rocking chair and knitting.
A story about a cherished gift.
Anna
So beautifully written.
Oh Sue.
This gave me goosebumps.
Wow.
Beautiful, beautiful writing here. Something about this brought the amazing writer, Jodi Picoult, to mind for me.
Powerful and wonderful...
...and...
I still have goosebumps.
Girl. You are my hero.
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