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| Salvador Dali - Venus and the Sailor in the breach ©2012 Susan Noyes Anderson |
call me from the sea to meet you
in the breach of dawn and dusk
shapes and angles flow to greet you
midnight masses, morning musk
neck to shoulder, limb to toe
rise above and fall below
in the deep, along the sand
breast to bosom, palm to hand
swirl inside this sacred eddy
twirl across the ocean floor
i will leave you sated, ready
nothing wanting, wanting more
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31 comments:
Amazing!!!
Oh nothing wanting, wanting more...you sure weaved a ribbon of love all the way through. I am happy someone else posted just as late as me! I feel so bad posting at the evening of Monday, but for now it's all I can do!
Oh lovely, lovely - form and content both!
Oooo.... very sensual :)
coool. :)
Very pretty poem. k.
Outlawyer is me, Manicddaily - (on wordpress). A lovely poem. k.
This is incredibly lovely .. I usually don't have my speakers turned up, this evening I did ~ your music the perfect accompaniment.
So lyrical, flows so nicely. I love it Sue.
nothing wanting, wanting more
OOOh. What an ending!
wow is it hot in here or is that just me? your rhyme scheme works well with the rhythm...and the beach a perfect setting as well...smiles....
So lovely..there is such a marvelous flow to it
Wow. Beautiful and sensual and perfect.
Hey, are you getting excited for Dancing with the Stars? :)
Your dancing is way better, by the way. :)
Oh, you little minx! Ooooolala!
lovely and lively dance with words!
It's lovely, Sue. And so romantic!
I also LOVE the music today! Reminded me of Joni Mitchell but I looked at the player and it says Judy Collins. I am not familiar with her so I will now go and do what my generation does when we are not familiar with something: I will google it. In this case her. :)
:)
Nice poem, delicious. Entering the world of Dalí.
Beautiful dancing rhythm - perfect:-)
This is truly inspired, Sue, i never thought of making love after midnight mass until now, thanks !
Beautiful words and I love the alliteration.
Beautiful throughout!
Well constructed Magpie. Thank you.
Such a sensual scene, beautifully written.
This poem describes the wild dance very well, I like it
"Skill" is the word that came to my mind. You said what you had to say with great skill. Congratulations!
Very sensuous. I could feel the passion and desire and finally, the longing.
Lovely and the picture was a great match.
Hugs!
Lovely and passionate!
Like the Magpie but not that noise that assails the ears as your page opens! I is SO distracting to an unsuspecting visitor who is only expecting poetry...
Wow.
Just.
Wow.
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