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Stone Cold Foxette
©2012 Susan Noyes Anderson
I’m steppin’ out. Yo, I got style.
Just look at me. Ya gotta smile.
I got my swing; I got my swag.
That whole glam thing? Snap. In the bag.
I really got it goin’ on.
Wassup? Just call me Donna Juan.
I got the name. I got the game.
But one thing’s puttin’ me to shame.
Check it––the golden slipper blues.
(My feet are too short for my shoes.)
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17 comments:
Sue, you've done it again. You nailed the prompt. I looked at the toes of those shoes and wondered what was missing. Now I can see!!
hahaha i was loving your swagger...then you got me chuckling....too funny...
Loved this, Sue! How you can write those poems so quickly I'll never know. They are so fun to read, and I think you did a great job on the prompt. I'm sure I would never have been able to do this one. Jenny seems to be doing more of those picture prompts.
Fantastic job.
You certainly are my poet hero, and it's kinda like a bling piece too! I'm thinking if the real story is ever told about this photo, possibly in Jenny's post, that it's a child in women's shoes...! Don't you think?!
That was delightful! You are so good at this!
Wow, great little poem/rap, ha. Loved the music you added too.
oh my. You are way more observant than I am. Was going to drive all the way over the hill to the mall and photograph shoes, but nature and a good hike (and comfy hiking boots) won the call! Have a great weekend. Loved the poem!
Great job on this one! She has too much confidence to let the blues get her down for too long!
Ha ha.
That's some good writing Sue!
oh you are just throwing down those lines!!!
love the rap ... uber cool!
Grand little poem...nice touch about the size of the shoes...they caught my attention.
Donna Juan! Ha! Too funny, :)
Sue, that was so fun! The lingo, the poem, the idea - all perfect! laurie
I found myself singing the "blues" along with you.
Terrific!
~Naila Moon
http://writing-out-of-the-blue.blogspot.com/2012/05/dressed-for-successa-story.html
Sue! This was super cute!
Wait until you see the 'rest of the picture' tomorrow morning!
ha!
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