That Jenny Matlock is full of surprises this morning. The words she has given us are "The End," and we're only allowed 25 more to reach ours. Yikes!
Here goes, my friends. The prompt, as always, is in red.
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Death Throes
©2011 Susan Noyes Anderson
“We’re through.”
“Whaddya mean, through?”
“Over.”
“Over?”
“Yeah, over. Kaput. Finis.”
“Finis?”
“Absolument finis.”
“What, you’re French now?”
“Not French. Frustrated. Fed-up. Done.”
“Wha'? Wassup?”
“The End.”
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41 comments:
Such snappy dialouge! Get the message across!
Sweet and to the point!
OK I interpreted it as 27 words too. Loved the French thing, nice one.
Bet he's still confused:@)
Cool, Sue. Very cool, indeed!
Great job Sue ! Honesty without game playing...so refreshing !
ha ha ha ha. That was funny.
loved the snappy...well done!
No wonder you're through - his brain's obviously addled, since you had to explain it so many times, and he still didn't get it!
Are you pushin the point here Sue? Haha! Loved it!~Ames :)
ha. Great job. and probably those words are spoken daily somewhere. "what are you french now". Loved it.
Ah, the typical HS break up. Great job!
Well done!! Funny...Peace and blessings
LOL, too funny. I've had this conversation over & over again... it counts when it's with my own internal voices right?? LOL
I have that same conversation at the end of every good book! This was wickedly clever.
cool,
very focused and apt words.
Great! I really enjoyed this one!
Good job! Straight to the point. I liked your take on this one. Now I have to go read some more. I sure wouldn't know what to do with "the end"
well, someone is in trouble! glad it wasn't me!
How great is this for your weekly write with Jenny.
I love it.
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I tell you Sue if it is not one thing it is another. lol
Love ya
Maggie
well done, as always. the end.
This is really cute and bouncy. I love the line "You're French now?" Great piece, Sue.
xoRobyn
A complete and neat dialogue, using the prompt very effectively.
Hah! I've used the line "the end" many times..only not with such style! I'm always surprised at your take on the prompts and I always enjoy them!
lol..that is almost the way I feel about Blogger's problem with the leaving comments!
Oh to have your quick whit. Nice job Sue, very entertaining.
That made me smile. You have a gift.
Oh Sue ... you writing is always such a gift!
Ha! Love it - so cute and clever :)
Kristin
LOL! Good one, Sue!
I think I've had this conversation before. Funny!
ha. for such a seous topic you pull off playful well...happy sunday!
Oh that was just a joy to read! What a fun take on the prompt, Sue! Just perfect!
too cute you are
If words don't suffice, hit him with a hammer...he will surely get the message...enjoyed this. :)
I feel like that's my LIFE right now, Sue! Lol
MWAHAHAHAHAHA! Perfect!
Wow...that was kinda intense.
Great use of the prompt! Which proves that you are good at dialogue (as well as poetry and prose and everything else that is about writing!)
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Anna
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Love it! You always come up with the greatest stuff.
Sue, this was so cute! I loved the dialogue here! You're amazing.
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