has naught to do with soldiers, brave and strong.
It makes no boast of golden treasure found,
nor causes lost, nor valiant battle song.
There is no gallant steed, no damsel fair,
no rousing tale of daring escapade.
No banner bold is hoisted to the sky,
no arrow launched from stony balustrade.
The greatest story that was ever told
does not take place in ancient castle keep,
but in a barren stable, rude and low,
while all the world in darkness lies asleep.
∞§∞
"For unto us a Child is born, unto us a son is given;
and the government shall be upon his shoulder;
and His name shall be called Wonderful, Counselor,
the Mighty God, the Everlasting Father, the Prince of Peace."
I am amazed at your easy command of words. And for these words to fall into a poetic rhythm as they do, seemingly effortlessly, leaves me awestruck.
ReplyDeleteI can now hear Handel's Messiah playing in y head. ;)
ReplyDeleteWhat lovely visions are dancing through my heart after reading your piece.
ReplyDeletetis that season...though it does not just have to be a season...smiles...this is only the beginning...or the middle...and one that is still being written in us...
ReplyDeleteA beautiful start to the Christmas season...keeping the real reason for celebrating...the birth of our Savior. Thanks Sue!
ReplyDeleteGreat poem and the right painting to accompany it.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem Sue.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful to read at the end of a long day. With such a lot of hysteria regarding Christmas in Blogdom, it's lovely to read such true words.
ReplyDeleteYes, I love this great delicacy, delicious poem!
ReplyDeleteGosh had to get all the way down here before a mention of christmasI was thrilled that it covered the real reason for the season
ReplyDeleteGosh had to get all the way down here before a mention of christmasI was thrilled that it covered the real reason for the season
ReplyDeletePerfect for C ~ and the season ~ carol, xxx
ReplyDeleteUnto us a Child is born...what a blessing to the whole world - a gift to mankind of pure selflessness and love. Your poem is beautiful and touching. Thanks for sharing your inspiration with us!
ReplyDeleteOne more thing, Sue, I'm gonna use this poem in my Sunspiration post this Sunday with a link back to your blog. :)
ReplyDeleteSue, your poetry just keeps getting better and better! Beautifully written words of an event that opened the door to heaven for us!
ReplyDeleteVery nice !
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written, and oh so true!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written. {:D
ReplyDeleteWhat a sweet, sweet post, Sue!!!
ReplyDeleteIt is the greatest story ever told.
ReplyDeleteWords and image exquisitely matched!
ReplyDeleteWonderful.
So true!
ReplyDeleteSo sweet and pretty. Now it seems like Christmas!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poetry...your words are so expressive and love the rhythm of your rhyme.
ReplyDeleteBlessings & Aloha!
Thank you so much for your lovely visit at my place and your sweet words.
He truly is the reason for the season.
ReplyDeleteHe truly is the reason for the season.
ReplyDeleteI've always believed there is much good to be found in humble surroundings. I probably think this way because it all goes back to the stable.
ReplyDeleteCharming post for the letter "C"...
ReplyDeleteThe story of Christmas is something to be treasured and your words express that really well!
Thanks for linking.
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