Monday, October 7, 2013

Time Stops for No One

image by crilleb50


time stops for no one 
but if i
sit down and freeze
blink neither eye
lock up my hands
and curl my toes
into the ground
who really knows
perhaps the rush
of time will end
till i can catch
my second wind

or do i merely
clutch at straws
full knowing time
has teeth and claws

the daisies are
no safety clause



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23 comments:

  1. Don't want to burst your (lovely) bubble ... time will not stop ~ for anyone or anything. I enjoyed this.

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  2. Love how the quick pace reflects the passage of time.

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  3. Time certainly does have teeth and claws sometimes, doesn't it? This is lovely!

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  4. Delicious poem! Very interesting your view of time! Greetings!

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  5. I can relate to this one too well! Lately I've been feeling borderline panic because time moves so swiftly....like there must be SOME way to slow it down!

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  6. Very thoughtful. But I wonder if we can learn to stop for time??

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  7. i dont think you can burrow those toes deep enough...and those that try to fight the passage of time surely get the teeth and claws...

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  8. What wonderful word pictures you painted with this poem.

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  9. Excellent job and the quick pace gave the impression that time does not wait

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  10. When my Mom was visiting I kept thinking about time..looking at her and realizing that she has aged..gracefully...yet not without the problems like falls, and breaks and eyesight and hearing loss. She lead a simple but remarkable life. I admire her fighting spirit against those "teeth and claws"! I hope to be as vigilant because time is grabbing at me too!

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  11. I want to be free of time. It is such a constraint on me. I like stretching light a cat,breathing deep, and letting go of time.

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  12. Bravo, excellent magpie, it stirs deeply. I could feel the bite, and that's me you hear crying, ouch!

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  13. As we age do we worry more and more about the passing of time...or will we eventually enter into a stage where we accept time and what it does to us? I wonder.

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  14. Lately I have felt exactly like that. So far I haven't found any way around it, except to not let it catch me up in Crazy Town. Tomorrow will come and I can pick up whatever I was doing today again. When time shows it's teeth I try not to flinch, but instead lay on extra essential oil in a lovely scent!

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  15. :D if only. What a sweet poem. I think it embodies the wish of most people's hearts. Especially for mothers!

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  16. Wonderful things, these second winds......thanks for this one

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  17. Sue, you have a gift for bringing words together into your lovely poetry.

    Ah yes, if time would but a moment stop..."to catch my wind"...or stop, to relish in a moment of the happy times with those that have passed...or with the memories of times with any of our dear loved ones.

    Blessings & Aloha!
    I am visiting our grand baby, so will not be posting this week...maybe next or then again, maybe not til I get back in 3 weeks. ...but I wanted to be sure to stop and catch up with the T posts. (time stopping for me to catch up with blog visits would be helpful too :o)

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  18. 'time has teeth and claws' - love it!

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  19. I don't know how you do it; but you continue to just amaze me. I am sure I have mentioned before you need to publish a book of poetry
    Blessings!

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  20. I will have to give this one a try, as I would agree time continues to roll on at break neck speed :)

    Kristin

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  21. So glad we only have to deal with time on earth....although in will miss my lovely watch

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