Tuesday, March 8, 2016

The Love Note

©2016 Susan Noyes Anderson

She loves him with a love profound,
but not that well-expressed.
The sweetness sings inside her heart 
but rarely leaves her chest.

She is too plain and he too fair.
How dare she seek his favor?
Ah, but he smiles…traces her face…
seizes her lips to savor.

She rides a seesaw of emotion,
coupled, yet alone.
Behind her dusky eyes she yearns
to be more fully known.

Unnerved, she pens a love note,
words that she has longed to say,
traps them inside an envelope,
kisses it on its way.

Written in response to a picture prompt from Tess Kincaid.

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Sandra said...

the advantages of paper....so nice!

Grandma Honey said...

This is a cliff hanger. With there were a sequel to this one :)

Pondside said...

Oooh I love a story with a little mystery!

Gail said...

May her dreams come true.

Well done.

Carrie Van Horn said...

Uncertainty can be rough...this is a beautiful poem Sue!

yaya said...

Not only a beautiful poem that fits the photo perfectly...she's mailing a letter...a real, pen, paper, stamp, snail mail, letter. That must be love!

LeAnn said...

I do love romantic poetry; this was awesome. It truly is a lovely poem. Blessings!

brudberg said...

I think there is a lot of hope here...

Amy Involuntary said...

Ahhh, so sweet! This had me Mona Lisa smiling through the whole thing. I love your poetry!

Cat-tails: here be wagging tales said...

And so it begins! :)

Friko said...

ah, sweet.
she must be very young still.

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