Charleston door |
©2013 Susan Noyes Anderson
It was Charleston in the fall,
no other bodies there to bend
the energy, just you and me (us...we),
begetting child-free memories to own.
The hotel reeked of history
and old rugs, water weeping from
the walls, halls filigreed in shades
of ochre, overlaid with stains of brown.
Our bed, four-postered, coverlet of lace,
commode beside, was dignified
by carved vitrine; replete with nicks, knickknacks,
dust tracks and violets––the velvet ones, with tales to tell.
It drew us into sweetness, thick
as warm molasses corked in clay
jugs, fading red to pink, the stink of slave
market graced now by art and flowers.
We walked for hours.
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You wove a pretty and nostalgic picture here.
ReplyDeleteMakes me want to take a trip there...very lovely.
ReplyDeleteThere's a whole novel held within these lines... well done.
ReplyDeleteoh i bet you did....its a wonderful place...full of history...some not pretty but...def a romantic place as well...smiles...hope you had fun...
ReplyDeleteNicks knickknacks dust tracks.
ReplyDeleteLove that.
There are dust tracks all over my knicknacks! Nice poem!
ReplyDeleteThis so rich and vivid I love it!
ReplyDeleteYour poem is incredibly lovely ....
ReplyDeleteYou make me want to go there. I could actually smell the mustiness of the old room. So many stories it could tell...
ReplyDelete. . . warm molasses corked in clay . . . sounds heavenly!
ReplyDeleteKristin
Charleston is such an amazing city. I love how your wove its history through this poem.
ReplyDeleteYes, you certainly opened the door to a true Charleston visit! Simply wonderful.
ReplyDeleteWhat a world you uncovered here, Sue
ReplyDeleteLovely, lovely, lovely!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
I love Charleston! Of course, the only time we went to a B&B there, we had a baby in tow...
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful love poem; just lovely.
ReplyDeleteBlessings and hugs!
What a lovely walk down Memory Lane.
ReplyDeleteQuite touching for old romantics like me.
Sue, I've read this several times and immersed myself in the scene you've painted so well with your well-crafted poem.
ReplyDeleteA lovely memory, very nice poem!
ReplyDeleteWhat a gracious step back in time.
ReplyDeleteIt drew us into sweetness, thick as warm molasses corked in clay jugs, fading red to pink, the stink of slave market graced now by art and flowers.
ReplyDeleteMemories are to be treasured what more having experienced them through travels. Some constraints but the nostalgia more than compensates! Nicely Sue!
Hank
I can smell that reek of history and feel the faded velvet - very sensuous poem. Delicious!
ReplyDeleteNow I want to go there!
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