Monday, February 27, 2012

In the Soup

THE PICTURE PROMPT: from MAGPIE TALES

Warhol at the drug store

In the Soup
©2012 Susan Noyes Anderson

I spill my soup sometimes
when I start sipping
or leave a bit of bubbly
on the floor.
I think I’m sinking;
maybe I’m just slipping,
but towels won’t keep me
dry, not anymore.

If paper (rolled by Scott)
could wipe this mess up,
I’d stock my shelves and
count myself redeemed.
But old Black Velvet never
lets me fess up.
And black-and-white?
Much grayer than it seemed.

Again, the fog invades.
I'm in the soup, with shades.

“Don't pay any attention to what they write about you.
Just measure it in inches.” –Andy Warhol

The quote = justification for taking poetic license here.

AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO
MY DARLING DAUGHTER!

21 comments:

  1. Sue, I love you! Always feeding my poetry appetite! :)

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  2. yay happy birthday to your daughter!

    and nice dance in your words...ah i know all about being in the soup....ha...smiles...maybe i need to wear shades...smiles.

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  3. it's not far to stoop
    When you're in the soup!
    Good one!
    and a big Happy Birthday to your
    daughter!

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  4. Oooh the fog invades - I know that feeling!

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  5. A very happy birthday to daughter Karin! Is she in the soup?

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  6. Yes, many, many Happy Returns to your daughter.

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  7. To your daughter: "Happy Birthday"! To you: "Congrats on a fun poem with the perfect verse for the picture prompt"..sounds like I just gave you an award..I should not have watched any of the Oscars I guess!

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  8. Great job...I shall have to check out this challenge!

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  9. Happy Birthday to your daughter! They grow up fast don't they. ~Ames

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  10. I love 'in the soup with shades' sounds like fun!

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  11. Birthday wishes to your daughter. I hope her day was happy, and I would love to have your recipe for soup...... it sounds so smooth, somewhat euphoric and deliciously rye. =D

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  12. And my art history self loved the reference to Mr. Warhol.

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  13. Cute!

    Happy Birthday to your daughter.

    Great words!

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  14. What, no voice singing Happy Birthday to go with this post? Shame!

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  15. You are witty and creative to be the band! GREAT job! Happy Birthday to your daughter!

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