tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post7292768357974097923..comments2023-10-28T00:18:13.590-07:00Comments on Sue's News, Views 'n Muse: Sand PaintingSusan Andersonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-64757499380066943912010-08-04T21:20:26.562-07:002010-08-04T21:20:26.562-07:00'and watching him my soul awakes' I love ...'and watching him my soul awakes' I love that!Grandma Honeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09587160523698527979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-81891654787150629572010-08-04T17:56:33.187-07:002010-08-04T17:56:33.187-07:00Don't know if you noticed, Mom, but I did more...Don't know if you noticed, Mom, but I did more than rhyme the 1st, 2nd and 4th lines of each verse. To keep the rhythm flowing between stanzas (and thereby create a feeling of the sea), I took the last word of the third line in each stanza and made it the predominant rhyming sound for the following stanza. It really has a neat effect, I think...kind of like the tides going in and out.<br /><br />I like the continuity.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-55015360564743429352010-08-04T17:26:33.281-07:002010-08-04T17:26:33.281-07:00Rhyming the first, second and fourth lines is hard...Rhyming the first, second and fourth lines is hard for me. I love that you can do any kind of rhyming poetry. This is a sweet one and the picture of Bryce in the sand is perfect to go along with this particular piece.Darlenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16797132860053426517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-51187642651557585792010-08-04T14:28:09.105-07:002010-08-04T14:28:09.105-07:00Love that. Beautiful picture and I love the poem ...Love that. Beautiful picture and I love the poem too!Our family chaoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09728284448484336757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-57316877841444095232010-08-03T21:13:58.696-07:002010-08-03T21:13:58.696-07:00So lovely, Sue.
I am convinced that time stands st...So lovely, Sue.<br />I am convinced that time stands still at the beach.Momzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01078211684662158122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-11002097976152117222010-08-03T14:36:46.081-07:002010-08-03T14:36:46.081-07:00"And watching him my soul awakes..." I j..."And watching him my soul awakes..." I just love this line of the poem. It is so true. Children can really awaken our souls when we choose to live in the moment and watch them. <br /><br />Loved this, Sue. Made me smile.Carolinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04953764061091454844noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-39389132103548396492010-08-03T14:07:42.551-07:002010-08-03T14:07:42.551-07:00This is right up my alley!!!This is right up my alley!!!Emhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11555733621307512935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-10220305857859411952010-08-03T13:14:20.109-07:002010-08-03T13:14:20.109-07:00Sweet. I love to watch little ones playing in the ...Sweet. I love to watch little ones playing in the beach sand.karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16313237142656662148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-2976200571985062632010-08-03T12:21:01.165-07:002010-08-03T12:21:01.165-07:00I love those pictures! Sand play is so fun...to w...I love those pictures! Sand play is so fun...to watch. hahaha.Louriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05477223472789865063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-29728987104340593062010-08-03T12:07:03.662-07:002010-08-03T12:07:03.662-07:00Aw, what a sweet poem! You really capture the cur...Aw, what a sweet poem! You really capture the curiosity and magic of a child at the beach. Beautiful!Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09670661525139676900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-67242574791725604822010-08-03T11:55:58.243-07:002010-08-03T11:55:58.243-07:00That was an awesome poem. I think you should publi...That was an awesome poem. I think you should publish a book of poems. Perhaps you already have. <br />Thanks for sharing! <br />Blessings to you!LeAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18107717294803352571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-58407386562773614642010-08-03T11:38:05.916-07:002010-08-03T11:38:05.916-07:00Precious pictures and wonderful poem. HugsPrecious pictures and wonderful poem. HugsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-81177638127235553232010-08-03T11:18:40.703-07:002010-08-03T11:18:40.703-07:00What a beautiful picture you paint. You've ca...What a beautiful picture you paint. You've captured him so perfectly!!People Who Know Me Would Say:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04621641188403948733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-1468392421702774812010-08-03T11:14:45.595-07:002010-08-03T11:14:45.595-07:00What great pictures!What great pictures!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05355424140404762226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-75726949564104506922010-08-03T10:50:04.968-07:002010-08-03T10:50:04.968-07:00Love the photo and the poem was perfect.Love the photo and the poem was perfect.Secret Mom Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18409014239711206789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-22714438454561825912010-08-03T10:23:59.009-07:002010-08-03T10:23:59.009-07:00Beautiful as always. I love those pictures.Beautiful as always. I love those pictures.Karen Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15991996620864410833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-65248378330944049362010-08-03T09:35:01.313-07:002010-08-03T09:35:01.313-07:00that's so great!that's so great!Jocelyn Christensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10342635172904848811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-32771510873015734792010-08-03T09:13:12.927-07:002010-08-03T09:13:12.927-07:00What a lovely word picture! I love the way you re...What a lovely word picture! I love the way you repeat that last line. Really lovely work.Braden Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08543019025938404436noreply@blogger.com