tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post5892590729203378009..comments2023-10-28T00:18:13.590-07:00Comments on Sue's News, Views 'n Muse: Life BendsSusan Andersonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-54693903954367167762012-05-12T02:18:25.979-07:002012-05-12T02:18:25.979-07:00This is so beautifully written, Sue. A vivid expre...This is so beautifully written, Sue. A vivid expression of life's flow.<br />-Judee from write tuit (WP)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-57602856916642983262012-05-10T05:24:05.392-07:002012-05-10T05:24:05.392-07:00Definitely one of the best of yours that I have re...Definitely one of the best of yours that I have read (so far). It reads like a classic-- Wordsworth perhaps ( well, that would be appropriate wouldn't it?<br />Your images are lovely and the way you have woven is terrific. I'm a big fan of alliteration as long as it doesn't beat you over the head with it; you have accomplished this. A real triumph!Kat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-2520084879989273362012-05-09T09:12:28.819-07:002012-05-09T09:12:28.819-07:00oh so beautiful and true...oh so trueoh so beautiful and true...oh so trueTerrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12112479764398508654noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-87087334827963814362012-05-09T01:55:05.701-07:002012-05-09T01:55:05.701-07:00This is really nice!:)This is really nice!:)Tarang Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10346902969017351667noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-1014136197243856272012-05-08T06:40:08.859-07:002012-05-08T06:40:08.859-07:00beautifully stated. Rivers are such a great metaph...beautifully stated. Rivers are such a great metaphor for life's twists and turns.anitamombanitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03705021153044549156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-61667881986244380792012-05-07T18:07:22.398-07:002012-05-07T18:07:22.398-07:00Beautiful. This, in particular:
"The rhythm ...Beautiful. This, in particular: <br />"The rhythm comes; the rhythm goes.<br />The river ebbs; the river flows." <br />The words flow like water. Just perfect.De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-42135262010750187172012-05-07T16:36:03.761-07:002012-05-07T16:36:03.761-07:00Beautiful..."Lifeblood must rush on to truth&...Beautiful..."Lifeblood must rush on to truth"...very rich!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-86603471873547279272012-05-07T14:56:07.763-07:002012-05-07T14:56:07.763-07:00the cadence here echoes that of
a river - well don...the cadence here echoes that of<br />a river - well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-8686003776543258812012-05-07T13:11:04.057-07:002012-05-07T13:11:04.057-07:00I miss the callow calm of youth,
the untried innoc...I miss the callow calm of youth,<br />the untried innocence, the ease.<br />Yet lifeblood must rush on to truth,<br />and salty tears spill into seas.<br /><br />How very true,Sue! The innocence of youth often brings tears at some wrong turns. Great write!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-50984487963136504482012-05-07T10:18:33.286-07:002012-05-07T10:18:33.286-07:00Oh this is really beautiful...very nice...Oh this is really beautiful...very nice...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-76529366726166417512012-05-07T09:51:34.568-07:002012-05-07T09:51:34.568-07:00Lovely poem - I especially like the last stanza.
...Lovely poem - I especially like the last stanza. <br /><br />(Oh, & thanks for liking mine!)The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-69252745448801233932012-05-07T09:01:59.415-07:002012-05-07T09:01:59.415-07:00you are such a gifted writer. Lovely poem.you are such a gifted writer. Lovely poem.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00498750042795390934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-29371187160606519982012-05-07T05:48:15.754-07:002012-05-07T05:48:15.754-07:00I am very pleased this excellent poem about life, ...I am very pleased this excellent poem about life, but good memories of that inexperienced youth.Leovihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14970831445283294241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-59181273299094425822012-05-07T03:37:01.707-07:002012-05-07T03:37:01.707-07:00Lovely close here especially. Very thoughtful and...Lovely close here especially. Very thoughtful and thought- provoking. KAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-71225681960772687552012-05-07T03:18:48.217-07:002012-05-07T03:18:48.217-07:00I love the flow of this poem! Wonderfu!I love the flow of this poem! Wonderfu!JDaniel4's Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10354900916937838719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-5445366465037680942012-05-07T02:27:48.920-07:002012-05-07T02:27:48.920-07:00Lovely. Life is all like that isn't it. Someti...Lovely. Life is all like that isn't it. Sometimes calm, sometimes raging and we learn to go with it. Lovely piece Sue.Daydreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04139175719967937843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-71809133151072997902012-05-07T01:17:39.034-07:002012-05-07T01:17:39.034-07:00Beautifully expressed sue!
relBeautifully expressed sue!<br />relrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09030572981830789370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-18203096018623244072012-05-06T22:15:43.442-07:002012-05-06T22:15:43.442-07:00You are becoming one of my favorite poets! :) Yep,...You are becoming one of my favorite poets! :) Yep, I've been following your posts and a few others doing the Mag posts and just had to give it a try too! Pretty calm photo this week! Karen<br />Oh and your song goes well with this too!21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-31506381412102923672012-05-06T22:08:56.933-07:002012-05-06T22:08:56.933-07:00A river is so calming and easy to be mesmerized by...A river is so calming and easy to be mesmerized by. Maybe we should just relax a little about watching life go by too.VKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17120810780221963010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-34638900935492857622012-05-06T21:05:45.839-07:002012-05-06T21:05:45.839-07:00This poem is awash with a tidal rhythm that ebbs a...This poem is awash with a tidal rhythm that ebbs and flows,in and out of shimmers and tranquility. I love the movement. Thank you for sharing, Sue. =DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-39916601126467846012012-05-06T19:48:25.218-07:002012-05-06T19:48:25.218-07:00that was an excellent poem! kudos, Sue!that was an excellent poem! kudos, Sue!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03803472040500529682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-75898751274324879572012-05-06T19:03:25.129-07:002012-05-06T19:03:25.129-07:00I've recently heard some of the graduation sen...I've recently heard some of the graduation seniors in my ward lamenting how hard life is and I wonder, if they can even fathom.<br />While their life is certainly flowing...what I wouldn't give to only be facing their turbulent waters. They seem to become more treacherous as the years go by.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09464184135822609876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-19678294071390558482012-05-06T18:38:37.863-07:002012-05-06T18:38:37.863-07:00I only have to look at my mother to know that I ca...I only have to look at my mother to know that I can trust that the bends and turns will take me to where I need to be. It's not always easy and life is not always kind, but I know that I will be given the strength to stay the course.<br />This was so beautifully written, and touched a chord in me.Pondsidehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02407539138546412482noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-28729339174546812922012-05-06T18:15:40.681-07:002012-05-06T18:15:40.681-07:00The ebb and flow of the river of life is one thing...The ebb and flow of the river of life is one thing..I tend to get caught on those darn snags and sandbars! Love the poem Sue!yayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12047536332780197024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072583027504108914.post-39269899376384431022012-05-06T17:52:33.003-07:002012-05-06T17:52:33.003-07:00Life is such a mystery isn't it? Chapters not ...Life is such a mystery isn't it? Chapters not written yet. You said it well.Grandma Honeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09587160523698527979noreply@blogger.com